1、不要再用 more and more了;该词组被评为中国恶俗词组榜榜首!!老师说能够用a growing number of..

　　2、inevitable——不可避免

　　3、should/would/could/may/might;为什么要用这个5个词?首要，口气比拟含蓄，不会很必定，显的谦善;其次，能够不思考动词的方式;所以这五个词被称为较贱的词。

　　4、physically beneficial——身体健康;副词+形容词的表达方式，比拟美观。

　　5、worldwide/globly/internationally famous——誉满天下

　　7、较初办法一：

　　Background

　　Controversy (2 different/opposite ideas)

　　As/Being a controversial issue.... 作为有争议的疑问....

　　Now days， the issue on....is highly debatable， and ideas vary from person to person——不一样的人有不一样的观念。(不要用different people)

　　Some would claim....，while some others may suggest....—— 一些人以为....另一些人以为....

　　Some would claim....，while the idea....is still held by some others. ——Idea倒装，语句更美观。不能用some或许the other，这样只要两种可能性，太肯定。

　　8、5个常用单词的代替

　　Think → claim / suggest / believe / advocate / maintain / suppose

　　Good → beneficial / profitable / helpful / sound / decent / positive

　　Bad → harmful / detrimental / hazardous / negative

　　Advantage → merit / virtue / benefit / profit / pro

　　Disadvantage → demerit / drawback / flaw / shortcoming / con / cost

　　9、few 0-1 几乎没有

　　A few 一些，不多 <5

　　Several 若干 <10

　　10、拥护某个观念

　　As for me，I side with the fomer/latter

　　中立观念

　　As far as I am concerned, I believe both views have their own merits and con coexit

　　11、like a double-edged sword 双刃剑

　　12、sth. can be neither absolutely perfect nor purely harmful

　　13、末段(总结)

　　All in all/to conclude/in conclusion/in general/ to sum up

　　When all the above-mentioned factors are taken into consideration, a conclusion could be drawn that … (首要用来凑字数)

　　14、On one hand.... contribute greatly to....

　　On the other hand/On the contrary/

　　15、in contrast，the demerits of....can not be ignored.

　　16、作文要点，其实即是不能重复;不要用一些恶俗的词，people等;少用榜首和第二人称;多变幻句式;少用自动句;注重符号;

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